Use this after IPSN-lineage reviews are released. IPSN is conference-style: a short, decision-focused rebuttal (verify the window and format on the current successor call), not a journal-style revise-and-resubmit letter. The rebuttal must stay double-blind — no author names, institutions, lab-named testbeds, or identity-revealing dataset/firmware links — and it must answer on the axes a sensor-systems reviewer actually raised.
Short and decision-focused. One decision-critical point per reviewer beats an exhaustive reply. Concede what is true, correct what is misread, and point to exactly where the answer lives in the submitted paper or artifact. Do not paste large new results the reviewers cannot verify in the window.
[R1 - "simulation only"] -> Point to the real-hardware result already in §4.2 / Table 3 (measured on
the MCU), which the review may have missed; state the platform and clock.
[R2 - "baseline untuned"] -> Report the equal-condition comparison already logged; give the number and
where it lives; if a tuning was fixed, say the budget was equal and documented.
[R3 - "ground truth?"] -> Name the surveyed reference and its own error; correct the misread that the
ground truth came from the model under test.
| Pushback | What it signals | IPSN-ready response |
|---|---|---|
| "Only simulated / no real hardware" | Evidence-realism doubt (often fatal) | Point to the on-device/in-field result if it exists; if it truly doesn't, concede and scope the claim rather than promise it |
| "Baseline is not a real alternative / untuned" | Soundness doubt about the comparison | Report the equal-condition numbers; name the tuning budget |
| "Energy is estimated, not measured" | Accounting doubt | Point to the instrumented-rail measurement and conditions; if only estimated, say so and bound it |
| "Deployment numbers look idealized" | Honesty doubt | Report yield, sync error, and failures as measured; do not sand off the losses |
| "Ground truth is circular / weak" | Construct doubt | Name the independent reference and its error; state the residual limit |
| "Wrong track / out of scope" | Track or venue mismatch | Clarify the primary contribution's track; hard to fully fix in rebuttal |
[Turn] rebuttal (conference-style; confirm window/format on the current call)
[Priority issue] <reviewer concern>
[Decision dimension] evidence-realism / soundness / baseline / ground-truth / deployment-honesty / energy
[Answer] <where the answer lives in paper/artifact, or the honest concession + scope>
[Anonymity check] <no identity leak, incl. board photos / testbed names / dataset DOIs: passed/issues>