In JPSP the introduction and literature review are long and load-bearing — they justify the whole
multi-study package and set up the theory. Reviewers in your section judge whether you have engaged
the right literatures and located a real, non-trivial gap. This skill positions the paper; the
argument itself lives in jpsp-theory-and-hypotheses.
jpsp-submission)"The contribution is incremental" is the most common JPSP positioning rejection. The fix differs by what the reviewer distrusts:
| Charge beneath "incremental" | Fix that reads as JPSP-scale |
|---|---|
| "Known effect in a new sample" | Reframe around a mechanism or moderator prior work could not specify |
| "You ignore the canonical debate" | Cite the section's core conversation (ASC cognition; IRGP groups; PPID traits) and locate your tension inside it |
| "A short-report journal owns this" | Show why the claim needs several converging studies |
Illustrative — invented to show the move, not a real literature.
Weak: "Self-control and well-being are understudied together" — a PPID reviewer reads a topic, not a gap. Sharper: "Trait self-control predicts well-being, yet whether it does so by avoiding temptation or resisting it is unresolved — two process accounts make opposite predictions in high-temptation contexts." This names the construct, the tension, and a diagnostic test, and foreshadows the multi-study package needed to dissociate the two processes.
Treat this skill as an executable review pass, not a prose hint. First lock the construct validity, study sequence, power/robustness plan, and boundary conditions; then judge whether the current manuscript answers the venue's real reader: psychology reviewers who need a theoretical construct, validated measurement, and cumulative-study logic.
claim / evidence / risk / manuscript location rows, so the next agent can edit rather than rediscover the issue.resources/official-source-map.md has been checked for volatile rules and the manuscript has one concrete fix for the largest venue-specific risk.【Section literatures engaged】list the 3–5 the editor will expect
【Gap / tension】one precise sentence
【Theoretical contribution】one sentence, stated up front
【Competing accounts】named + how the paper adjudicates
【Study-set foreshadow】why N studies are needed
【Next】jpsp-theory-and-hypotheses
../../resources/external_tools.md — reference managers + APA 7th formatting../../resources/official-source-map.md — section remits and house format