Use this during revision. The UAI readership lives on probabilistic reasoning, graphical models, causality, and Bayesian methods, and the posted review criteria end with "clarity of writing" as a first-class axis. At this venue clarity is mostly a formal property: whether every symbol, assumption, and probability statement means exactly one thing.
Probabilistic papers die by notation drift more than by grammar. Enforce a single notational regime before polishing sentences:
p is a density, do not let it moonlight as a probability
mass function and a marginal without saying so.p(y | x) versus p(y | do(x)); a causality paper that blurs this once loses its
causal readers.pa(V), whether graphs are
DAGs, MAGs, or CPDAGs — and never switch mid-paper.% Preamble discipline: define once, use everywhere
\newcommand{\E}{\mathbb{E}}
\newcommand{\indep}{\perp\!\!\!\perp} % conditional independence
\newcommand{\do}[1]{\mathrm{do}(#1)} % interventions, always \do{x}
\newtheorem{assumption}{Assumption} % A1, A2... citable by label
% Every theorem names its assumptions explicitly:
% \begin{theorem}[Identifiability]\label{thm:id}
% Under Assumptions~\ref{a:faithful} and \ref{a:positivity}, ...
With unlimited appendices in the same PDF, the 8 pages are pure argument budget. Spend them so a reviewer can reach a verdict on correctness, novelty, and backing without opening the appendix — and needs the appendix only to verify:
A venue about uncertainty notices overconfident language immediately.
| Overclaimed | Calibrated for UAI |
|---|---|
| "Our method outperforms all baselines" | "Improves over X and Y on 5 of 6 datasets (mean ± sd over 10 seeds); ties on Z" |
| "The posterior is accurate" | "R-hat ≤ 1.01 on all parameters; ESS > 400 per chain" |
| "Our intervals are well calibrated" | "Empirical coverage 89.3% ± 0.8 at nominal 90%" |
| "Works for any graphical model" | "Applies to discrete pairwise MRFs; extensions in App. E" |
| "First to study X" | "To our knowledge, the first identifiability result for X under A1–A2" |
Symmetrically, do not under-claim guarantees you actually prove — "may help in some settings" wastes a theorem.
The opening page should let a bidding reviewer and a skimming AC reconstruct the paper. Verify each element exists and appears in roughly this order:
UAI titles are unusually literal, and bidding rewards that: name the object and the regime ("Identifiability of X under Y", "Unbiased Z estimation via W") rather than branding a system name. A memorable acronym can ride along after a colon, but the pre-colon half should let a reviewer decide "mine" or "not mine" in one read. Avoid question titles and avoid claiming words ("optimal", "exact") the paper then qualifies — at this venue the title is the first claim checked against the evidence.
[Notation audit] consistent / drift found at: <symbols, sections>
[Assumption ledger] labeled? cited-by-label in each theorem? novel ones flagged?
[Spine check] verdict reachable from 8 pages alone? weakest section: <n>
[Claim calibration] <overclaims and underclaims with suggested rewording>
[Bid signal] abstract names model class + contribution type?