JPART reviewers are public-management theorists. A paper that cites a pile of PA work but never names the conversation it advances reads as atheoretical and stalls. The goal is to place the paper inside a live PA debate and state precisely what it changes.
Pick one primary move and make the introduction serve it. Mixing several weak moves reads like a literature dump.
| Move | What the manuscript must show | Weak version to avoid |
|---|---|---|
| Boundary condition | A PA theory works only under condition C, with C justified theoretically | "We found heterogeneity" with no theory for C |
| Mechanism correction | The accepted explanation is replaced or refined by a better mechanism | A mediation table without theoretical stakes |
| Construct clarification | A concept is separated from a neighbor (e.g., red tape vs. burden) with measurement logic | Renaming old variables |
| Institutional translation | A theory from another field changes when applied to public-sector institutions | Importing psychology/econ theory with no PA modification |
| Design adjudication | A credible design overturns or narrows a prior observational claim | "Better data" without explaining the theoretical implication |
| Paper type | Literature it must engage | The trap to avoid |
|---|---|---|
| PSM / motivation | the PSM construct + measurement + endogeneity debates | citing Perry once and moving on |
| Representative bureaucracy | passive→active representation, the conditions literature | a demographic correlation with no representation theory |
| Performance management | performance-information-use + goal-ambiguity theory | reporting a performance correlation atheoretically |
| Behavioral PA | the psychology-into-PA program + prior experiments | a one-off experiment detached from PA theory |
| Collaborative/network governance | governance/network theory it tests | a case description with no governance mechanism |
Before drafting, write a one-paragraph map with these five sentences:
If sentence 5 is weak, go back to jpart-research-design before polishing the
introduction. If sentence 4 is merely "we study a new place," narrow the venue or
raise the theoretical move.
【Conversation】the live PA debate this paper advances
【Key works】the 3-6 that define it (incl. the theory's canonical statement)
【Gap】what the theory mispredicts / under-specifies / has never been tested against
【Move】how this paper changes the theory
【Move type】boundary / mechanism / construct / institutional translation / design adjudication
【Closest competitor】what it cannot adjudicate
【Venue signal】why it is a management-theory contribution (not PAR/JPAM)
【Next】jpart-theory-building
../../resources/exemplars/library.md — real JPART papers by PA theory × method../../resources/official-source-map.md — JPART scope, keyword convention (theory/theme/method)