The three PNAS tracks fail preflight for different reasons — check the one you chose:
Direct Submission: the editor is assigned by PNAS, so the cover letter must argue broad significance and name suggested editors/reviewers. Blocker: no suggested editor in a field where the paper is cross-divisional.
Contributed: an NAS member communicates their own paper, secures ≥2 independent reviewers, and submits their reviews plus author responses. Blockers: member over the annual quota; reviewers not demonstrably independent; review file missing.
Prearranged Editor: an NAS member is lined up to handle a Direct submission before upload. Blocker: the editor arrangement is claimed but not confirmed in the cover letter.
Cover-letter significance paragraph: before / after
The cover letter's opening is the editor's first read of your general-significance case.
Before: "Please consider our manuscript, which reports new results on system X of interest to specialists in the field."
After: "We report that system X resolves a question debated across two PNAS divisions: [one-sentence broad claim]. Because the result [general implication], it will interest readers well beyond the immediate subfield — which is why we submit to PNAS rather than a specialist journal."
The revision states the cross-division stake, ties it to the Significance Statement, and justifies the venue choice — exactly what a handling editor triages on.
Output format
【Track】 Direct / Contributed (+ eligibility confirmed)
【Blocking gaps】 [...] (must fix before upload)
【Warnings】 [...] (should fix)
【Files ready】 main / figures+legends / SI Appendix / cover letter / metadata
【Verdict】 GO / NO-GO + the top 3 fixes
【Next】 submit | pnas-rebuttal (after decision)
Anti-patterns
Do not upload before accession numbers/DOIs exist.
Do not submit without the Significance Statement and Classification.
Do not let the Significance Statement duplicate the abstract.
Do not rely on memory; run the checklist top to bottom.